Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Morning High

Lost in contemplative thoughts
staring out across the cloud tops
the bustling cities  world far below
space and time go  not  to waste
as peace of meditation transcends
confusing chaotic thoughts to quieten
a balance to the scales of life
with serenity of a bird in flight
listening to hear a blade of grass
whisper nature’s secrets on the wind
the solitude  of this mountain high.

Author notes

The border created by Jeannie D...my border queen and good bad girl.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • penman gold member
    January 11
    Edit | Reply

    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Great border. Thank you for sharing


  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    nicely written

    "with serenity of a bird in flight
    listening to hear a blade of grass
    whisper nature’s secrets on the wind
    the solitude of this mountain high." wonder if that is the same mountain?

  • June-bug
    September 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    A Beautiful write with tranquility of a peaceful mind. Like the part of confusing choatic thoughts quieting. Pleasure to read.


  • DarkHunter
    September 11, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    wow, a depth most of us wish we could reach, a true poet.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 8, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Ahh this is truly beautiful. Such emotion and flow. I held my breath while reading this all through. It felt like a real balm to the soul.
    Thank you for sharing yopur talent.
    Gaylene

1 - 5 of 5