Lost in contemplative thoughts
staring out across the cloud tops
the bustling cities world far below
space and time go not to waste
as peace of meditation transcends
confusing chaotic thoughts to quieten
a balance to the scales of life
with serenity of a bird in flight
listening to hear a blade of grass
whisper nature’s secrets on the wind
the solitude of this mountain high.
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Hoodwinked!!!
Very creative, and I like the title. You have some internal rhyming going on of course within the poem. It makes the piece even more enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing this lovely write.
Always write from the heart
Never give up
Kate
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. Great border. Thank you for sharing
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nicely written
"with serenity of a bird in flight
listening to hear a blade of grass
whisper nature’s secrets on the wind
the solitude of this mountain high." wonder if that is the same mountain?
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A Beautiful write with tranquility of a peaceful mind. Like the part of confusing choatic thoughts quieting. Pleasure to read.
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wow, a depth most of us wish we could reach, a true poet.
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Ahh this is truly beautiful. Such emotion and flow. I held my breath while reading this all through. It felt like a real balm to the soul.
Thank you for sharing yopur talent.
Gaylene
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