Red rising sun,
Chilled, dew-dropped mornings,
Changing colours.
Metamorphing grass,
Lush green to dead brown,
Sealing time.
Greying skies,
Granet-coloured tears,
Carried on chilled breaths.
Frantic hearts racing,
Anxiety pulled in by,
The cold of ages.
Baited breaths and whispers,
In puffs of milkey air,
Like smoke in the sky.
Red, chilled noses,
Rouged cheeks and freezing hands,
An pink ears.
Leaves flitting like wings,
Colours, cold, peace,
Autumn.
Author notes
wrote this durring school, it isn't Autumnn quite yet, but its getting there and its my favorite time of year as well. <3
A contest entry
- I love Autumn and I am giving many points to the one who will make me love it even more. by Loveandblessings2u.
700 points, ended September 12, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent
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I love this piece,
you made it seem even more
beautiful, just as I asked.
Thank you so muce for this,
I truly enjoyed a lot.
Good luck in the contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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