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Unfinished Song

like an unfinished song
like an unwritten book
all hope gone and faded
the tears come unbidden
they do not cleanse my soul
they wash away the words
and leave a broken heart
grief stricken, sorrow filled
no strength of their own
please, Lord, don't let me go on alone
in you is the strength, the hope and the love
that can shower me
with blessings from above
lift me up above myself
my sorrow and my grief
to finish the song with its happy and sad
to write the book with its good and bad

Does it sound like a cling on for hope?

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  • davidwright silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    An interesting write. It sounds as though you're going through a difficult time. Welcome to Allpoetry this is a place of journeys and stories and observations. Good luck and happy trails


  • poetryality silver member
    September 12, 2008
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    Keep holding on to the faith you've written here and you will accomplish all that you set out to do. The poem is somber and melancholy but shines with hope. Seems you're in the middle of the strom, please know, the skies will clear to blue again. Excellent writ!

    One Love ♥

    Renee