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(techno-geek note: when you arrive, you may need to 'allow java applets' to run it...)
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(techno-geek note: when you arrive, you may need to 'allow java applets' to run it...)
Author notes
I went for the 'something he may enjoy' option...
In a list
- Technically Challenged (also see Avant Garde) • next in list
- Avant Garde in Form and Presentation • next in list
A contest entry
- Favorite Poets & People: kirbysman by Dienush.
500 points, ended September 26, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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That was Superb!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hey, thank you, ras, (and glad it worked...)!
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Wow... that was quite hard for me to read. Interesting, nonetheless. Intriguing. Thanks for your entry
~Diana
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*applauds*
I ADORED this it made me smile a lot. Absolutely wonderful. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Bravo!!!!
SarahJane
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thanks- that WAS the main goal, that 'e' word which is so often neglected...!
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Oh my, a pleasant surprize and lot's of fun to view the first plasma poem re the birds and the bee's, the short lines I got the gist of but the longer one's thought they were the bee's knees and disappeared faster than an English summer breeze! Loved it, quirky, creative, refreshingly different. If it was too scroll a tad slower then perhaps it would be easier to assimiliate and absorb every nuance as opposed to the general gist.Bravo.
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thanks- now that makes one vote for scrolling slower and one for scrolling faster... lol
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I like the plasma poem, but I couldn't read the whole thing. I got impatient waiting for the words to appear--took too long for my liking. I like it, but I get the feeling it's a one-shot wonder--another one like this wouldn't quite cut it.
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Very clever and very impressive, unfortunately my concentration isn't what it used to be( ill health and all that sort of nonsense)so I couldn't keep on reading it all the way through, I'm sure that if I had, I would have liked it. This is the first time I've seen this kind of work. Cheers Tws...
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I thought this was cleverly done!
Applaud-Applaud-Applaud...
for we bold poets enjoy creativity and style,
even if the poem needs a little FIRE here and there!
Cleverly done!
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