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My epic love story.

I saw him, I was like, DAMN he's hot!
I talked to him, never before have I heard the sweetest words.
I crushed on him, turns out he secretly felt the same.
Then I loved him, he loved me too.
I hurt him, he forgave me.
I hurt him, he told me he loved me.
I hurt him, couldn't bear to hurt him once more.
So I left him, he begged me back.
I loved him, He loved me too.
I loved him, things started to change.
I loved him, words were barely exchanged.
I loved him, I was all to blame.
If I never hurt him, things would still be the same.
If I listened to him, there'd be no complaints.
If I trusted him, his love would be on that same high plane.
But I hurt him, so now things won't change.
I still love him, he says he does, but it's not the same.
I'll still love him even if his feelings completely die.
I think of him, so much, the memories make me cry.
I'll still love him, I'll always be there.
I'll never leave him, I'll be there if he ever returns.
But now I'll give him a break.
I'll let him live his life, he has his own problems to face.
I still love him my feelings for him, won't ever change.

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  • Poetess12
    September 8, 2008
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    I like your poem, you used the word "Him" well.

    Thank you for your entry.


    • somixedup
      September 8, 2008
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      Thanks ^-^!

      And thanks for giving me an honorable mention, it's my first time winning anything in a contest .