Glittergold bold blossom
cramped petals fried
by brittling frost
frozenfur fine hair
stunned straight
and glassbreakable
like a bentbroke heart
wanting more amore
than is possible
forever
shattering
stipplestuck
like iceshot incidents
of blossombrush
with terrible icy death
In a list
A contest entry
- Beat Generation by GirlAnachronism.
475 points, ended September 29, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is awesome.
bentbroke heart - cooliness
Enjoyed reading.
Good luck.
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this is great. i like the length. the second and thirds stanzas are wonderful and the last line left me nearly breathless. thanks for the entry and keep up the good work
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Your voice rings with such astonishing clarity, my Friend.Good luck in the contest, Sweetie.
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