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senryu string

ticking me off
a dog chewing
the flea collar

seven year itch
the old dog
still scratching

scratch off
the dog chews up
my lottery ticket

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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    What a delightful collection of Dog Senryu! Creative and cute, well done!

    Dennis


  • Manoj Sanyal
    September 8, 2008

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    hahaaa....
    chewed up lottery ticket .... seems no end of chewing .... and it does not end in ticket.
    Thanks for participation.
    Good luck,


  • poetrandy
    September 8, 2008

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    Excellent Senryu String!

    WOW! A string about man's best friend! I have a little dog that we just love -- some of your poetic images apply to all my thoughts of this dog and past ones, as well! Great work, azure85!