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these are my dancing shoes





The day has lessened its embrace,
Autumn pulling at its light
greedily.

Nighttime became shallow,
much like me-

tingling and ready.


The curtain it is itself;

wearing a mask
and I'm not even early.


I taste of apples
and sunsets,

skin caked
and pealing dully.


There is not the softening
I expected,

only the rush,
rush,
rushing

and lack of shut eye.


I dream all but hazily,
wondering yourself
how I awake
with less clothes.


Red, red, red.
When I cannot see the train approaching,
but feel it within
my hollow chest cavity,

red.


Every branch
loses its fullness,
children lost
to be
trampled
underfoot.


Four months.







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Inspired by: September


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  • Saffron gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    "I taste of apples and sunsets"--that's such a wonderful description.

    Thank you for writing this for the contest

    Saffron