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Thinking

I sit and think, wondering up at the sky...
(you always said i thought too much)
Drifting and lost in the 'why'
(i don't ever wonder 'why not')
I've never dared to dream.
Drifting in thought I know;
the difference between
  me
        and you.
The chasm that stretches to eternity.
(and loops back on itself)
To reveal a secret we've known all along...
(did we ever get along?)
A thought said, drifts
    to be forgotten.
(stripes of memory gone)
Left to wonder for how long will I sit and stare?
(is anyone there?)
(whispers of voices i know too well)
I turn and know my own hell,
for I can -s-e-e- but they can not.
(they don't see this whirling plot)
Devices left to shred
  dreams
      hopes
          lives
                worlds.
(only i can see what you can not)
I am blind to you.
So, tell me,
am I real?
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Just randomness I wrote down and decided to share.

~I am nothing, yet I still am.~

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  • SoMe
    September 9, 2008

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    The only reason I bother to come back to AP every other day or so, is to see if you've written anything new. I loved it; you're too talented, I DEMAND you share some of it with me

    I love yous~


    • -Death-s Punchline-
      September 9, 2008
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      ;hands you some of my talent;
      I feel honored that you only come on to read my stuff. You should write some, I love reading yours.
      Thank you for the comment.