my original girl was tempted
my princess wanted the reign
my original girl was living,
heaven forgive me
my girl was the innocent victim
of the world's most perfect crime
she didnt want to die,
heaven forgive me
mission aborted, crush it up and snort it
viper peddles poison to those who can afford it
and only the first hit's free
he blamed it all on my girl
and she blamed it all on me
its all lost in translation,
original catastrophe
my original girl remembers
my original girl regrets
childhood is a dream,
heaven forgive me
father he has spoken, roll it up and smoke it
my girl knows the poison is the only thing to hope for
and only the first hit's free
Author notes
supposed to be about eve in the bible
im taking bible lit right now
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Comments
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whoa
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Yes, I agree. Very good work with this poem
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Hmmm, interesting. It's the first time I've read a poem that makes it sound as if the apple was a drug, but then again, it could just be how I read the poem.
Very good work, an the biblical twist makes it interesting.
Good work,
Ragnarok
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