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We Were Once ONE

As days go by
As hours turn into minutes
And minutes turn into seconds

As days turn into nights
A night without you is very painful
Which is unknown to me

But all I can think bout is how we were once one
Together we made time pass by faster
But now I realize we are apart
Indeed this is very painful to me

But once again all I think about is how we were once one

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 13, 2008
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    I like it..thanks for sharing...


  • ratkos
    September 8, 2008

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    GREAT WRITE
    I loved the take on this My favorite line was "Together we made the time pass by faster" i never thought of it that way but i'm glad you did.Unfortunately i've been there and you put it into words so well.

  • Judith Chandler
    September 8, 2008

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    "Together we made time pass by faster." A reminder of how time can just drag by when a loved one is gone or even if general depression has set in.