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Saving You

You can always count on me ,
To be here when you need me,
Even if you're standing on the edge of the abyss,
I'll be there to catch you if you fall.

The world could be coming to an end,
The earth just falling apart,
But I'll be there to cover you,
Nothing will bring you harm.

I'll do whatever it takes,
To keep you safe,
If saving you sends me to Heaven,
I'd greet them with open arms.

Author notes

"I will never let you fall
I'll stand up with you forever
I'll be there with you through it all
Even if saving you sends me to Heaven"
--Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, YOUR GAURDIAN ANGEL


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By: PanicInSeconds

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Comments

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Nicely done! Great message! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 18, 2008

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    Very nice words of assurance for someone you love. Wonderful inspiration from your prompt. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • HereComesTheSun
    October 17, 2008

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    beautiful piece
    i loved the last stanza just gorgeous
    overall this is just a beautiful piece


  • Broken Vow
    October 17, 2008
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    wow. i like this. nice prompt. i love the last stanza. good luck in iiwuvyouxoxo's contest!


  • Musical Renaissance
    September 12, 2008

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    "I will never let you fall
    I'll stand up with you forever
    I'll be there with you through it all
    Even if saving you sends me to Heaven"
    --Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, YOUR GAURDIAN ANGEL

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