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Disenchanted

Disenchanted
  falling down
A spiral of
  disillusionment
Wading into
  A heartless
way of living
  And slowly becoming
what I never
  Wanted to be

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22. Disenchanted
Here it is hope you like it.

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  • aanika
    September 30, 2008

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    Wading into
    A heartless
    way of living

    I liked that
    I liked the format as well
    but it was a little bit short.


  • etoile
    September 29, 2008

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    i love this. the way it's written is wonderful
    and the imagery and you're take on the title prompt is great.
    Disenchanted
    falling down
    A spiral of
    disillusionment
    ---
    those were my favourite lines.

    thanks for entering