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Aching For You (A Start)

I ache for you
"Some days" you say
You wish you had someone
someone who loved you
and would stick around
to love you
And all I can do is sit here
listen to you saying it
powerless
aching for you

Aching for a chance
to break from the crowd
turn from face to woman
Someone who could love you
and would stick around
to love you
But all I can do is sit here
listen to you saying it
powerless
aching for you
Just a face in the crowd
But I am already listening
isn't that a start?

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    Yes..may be ..but the confirmation is yet not established and that is the real joy of this heart...well done..