Breathless moments of astral spirit sway,
dispence themselves in mastrodoms delight.
Stretching toward the heavens in rich display,
their beauty springs of hope both day and night.
I am in awe at wealth of flaming leaves,
to take me to the height of glory's quill.
Soul unto master craves with holy cleave;
the trees confess their praising to His will.
I'm magnified in God's great artistry.
His paint brush dipped in colors so complete;
give eye candy that wields its mystery,
and showers us in hues that none can beat.
For without God our sight would disallow;
look yonder at the house of freedom's bow.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XI by Samplette.
2100 points, ended September 20, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive critique please.
Comments
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you balance and beauty in this poem, a wonderful take on this lovely image of god's creation. and congratulations on your chalice. -s
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Wonderful
A very inspirational creation. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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shame on me for staying away so long from your poetry...
i think this is the first sonnet i have read written by you, and it is pure and lovely like a prayer. Love, Lane
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Beautiful Renee,
God is the greatest artist of all. He gives our hearts inspiration and our words meaning. This is such a fine way to praise his glory. I adore your words and the volume so little words can speak.
Bravo!
Criss
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A stunning write. So loving and uplifting. Such a blessing to read. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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This expresses both the majesty of the creation we get to observe, and our wonder and appreciation at the incomparable beauty of it all, and that it reproduces itself without the help of man! How wonderful your words, how strong your descriptions. Bravo. Have a blessed day.
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Honored to read
Without ever a doubt, when I come to this place I find strenght in your faith, your words and your presence.
May your day be blessed!
Michael~
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The wonder of this write takes me back to childhood,
a time I looked forwared to each season with childish joy. Thanks for such a write and good luck in contest wise woman
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Breathtakingly beautiful sis
C
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Beautiful! God truly is an artist...and your words have helped capture the real meaning of His beautiful work =)
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hey..
The comment below stole my thoughts!
anyways I echo
my friend here.. you already know how special you are no sense in beating you bout the head with it! l.o.l. beautiful work sweet lady!
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OMG ~~~ This is so beautiful,
I just love this time of year.
The Fall, Autumn has always seem
to be so amazingly beautiful.
I wish it could be like this all
year around.
God really is pretty amazing, now aint he...
Your poem is just so up lifting, makes one
feel all good inside. It is warm and cozy,
soft and touching and I just simply love it.
Your words made me smile, thank you.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Beautiful
Very well written words of truth. Soul sisters we will always be. This is the truth.
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such imergery and beauty. love how it just calms teh soul. Thanks for sharing.
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