He came home to find the note she left stuck to his door. The contents shook his jellpermed smoothie self to the spincter. She made it quite clear that she was moving on.
Hey, Doctor feel good.
Guess what stud. You can take your immortal luscious vibrations and stuff em all where the moon don't shine. You thought I'd be high forever on your 9 to 5 mouth run of cow cookies didn't ya? Well, I saw you and your dust-mop, cootie queen mama goin' super 8 last night down at the 7 eleven and you best stay clear of me from now on, 'cause I'd just as soon roast your nuts on an open flame then spit on you right now. Yea, you think I couldn't pick something as good as you up in the bargain bin at Hyvee, well think again. Things are gonna be H-E-B for me, sweety, an' there aint no butts about it! HERE EVERYTHING'S BETTER! cuz you're no more. See you around sweet-cheeks. Hope your happy with that dishwater bimbo cuz I'm outa here!
Author notes
Word Bank 2
luscious
vibrations
dr feel good
nuts
roasted
open
flame
high
9 to 5
7 eleven
super 8
Hyvee
H-E-B
a bit of a departure from my customary style, I am aware. But, it wrote itself before I could stop it. Just had to submit it.
A contest entry
- Word Bank #2 Contest!!! BIG POINTS!! by K a t.
1600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love this one a lot. and yes I can tell that you got into this quite well. I got a good chuckle from this.. excellent job with the word bank.
good luck
kat
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Well, you used all the words and best I can tell you really got into the spirit of the story.
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