Service

Breath catches in her throat...
vibrant red hair, soaked from sweat...
clings to her face.

He looks deep into
her succulent eyes,
hollow voice states;

"Thanks...I like hard candy...
...so what's your name?"

With rainbow grin, she replies,
"my name is Charlie,

and
I prefer
milk chocolate."

Author notes

Word Bank #1....breath throat vibrant hair red grin charlie chocolate deep
milk succulent hollow rainbow
as far as I know...or can ascertain, "hari" is not a word unless used in conjunction with another...

A contest entry

Word Bank #2 Contest!!! BIG POINTS!! by Sweet Impatience. 1600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Sweet Impatience
September 28, 2008
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you did an excellent job with the word bank.. I love it a lot....

good luck

kat
- islekine
  September 28, 2008
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  Thanks...
  I really enjoy word banks...glad you liked it...lol..
  it just came out...
  
  P>S> this was tougher than usual!!
  I write short...almost had to really write a lot..
  thanks
Wandering Woodchuck
September 8, 2008

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I like it. Great job. I used hari as part of the name Mata Hari. The only other think I could come up with was hari-kari.

Mike