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You have no idea, love
what it's like to stand
by you,
face to face
without touching you;

No one can see how
I do this,
let it be my hands
and follow their lead;

Even when you walk
far away, by me
I go along with you
like a heroine
in the curve of your arm.

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  • Beret55 silver member
    October 6, 2008
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    Well done, a lot said in so few words.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    Ah..what a thought your brought here..especially the last stanza is a great immagery.....I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing it...


    • eclairluv
      September 7, 2008
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      Thank you very much PrabhuDayal!! I appreciate it!