I was a child
of some one
lend to you to
love like no one
I was brought to
bring you pain
to mourn me
when I am dead
to cry bitter tears
when my body stand
but before my lord
call me back to his solace
enjoy the moments
of us here in his gracious
and should my stay be brief,
you will have our
endless memories
to calm you, console your grief
I can only promise you my love
from my father up above
but should his angels
come to bring some pain
brave up the bitter grief
and let not your tears stain
In a list
A contest entry
- loseing sum 1 by Christina-is-crazy.
300 points, ended September 22, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think?
Comments
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Hey
First id like to say
this is a beautiful poem.
I really liked it.
I held this contest becasue my aunt just died not that long ago.
and i wanted to see what other people
thought and felt about ther loved ones who passed
and there love ones who are dying.
Such an amazing poem.
i really like your writing
Thanks so much for entering my contest
i hope to see some of your other poems in my upcoming contest~
~~~christina -
This was so sad but beautiful. Thats very hard to write sad beauty, but you my dear one have done just this!
Hugs
~Lisa~
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