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blossom with sunlight





do not stand my
grave and weep
I am not there,
I am up above sleep
I am the winds soft
that blow your way
I am the Sunray that
lighten up your day
I am the lonely star
that shines your night
I am the that flower that
blossom with sunlight
I am the smile
upon your face
I am the light
to shine your way
so do not cry,
because I did not die
do not stand my grave and weep
lord Jesus only
ask me to go to sleep






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  • Christina-is-crazy
    September 22, 2008

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    Hey
    First id like to say
    this is a beautiful poem.
    I really liked it.
    I held this contest becasue my aunt just died not that long ago.
    and i wanted to see what other people
    thought and felt about ther loved ones who passed
    and there love ones who are dying.
    Such an amazing poem.
    i really like your writing
    Thanks so much for entering my contest
    i hope to see some of your other poems in my upcoming contest~



    ~~~christina


  • Soft-Rain
    September 10, 2008

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    Again an amazing but sad write, understand though if we are with the Lord we are not sad.
    Beauty abounds in this mourning.

    Hugs
    ~Lisa~