Fence in the dark with that your told,
Forget to mention how you dismember the mold,
Shadowed tide brings back the harsh reminiscences
Cascade of death seeps through the faulted essences .
Ripened permeated bodies that lay before hell ,
Kissed by the devil brought in to death I tell.
Envelope me in the bereavement fog,
The gates unbolt fortified by the black dog.
Triplicate incentive you are here remains,
Harsh feelings and burning pain sustains,
The shroud of fire blankets the deceased,
The inhabitants of hell seem to increased.
A contest entry
- Word Bank In Rhyme by piccola.
600 points, ended September 13, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thank you for entering. Nice use of the word bank
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Excellent use of rhyme!
The second stanza is, in my opinion, the most powerful. It has brilliant, strong and powerful imagery that knocks the breath right out of you.
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