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Discord

I bleed from open wounds of discord
Lover’s betrayals spill across the ashen floor of your world
An arbitrator of silken lies
Upon lasciviousness moans
In rhythmic timing to the beating of contrivance tears
Artificial lust
Carbon copy sins
Deceptive moans left to fall upon pleading ears
Dream weaver’s teaching the artistry of seppuku
Through Beethoven’s illustrious 5th  
Breathe melodious kisses
To inveigle your children while they slumber
Where do you wait?
Within the laugh which chides rebirth?
Under the fallen tear which threatens to end it all?
Or within me?
What deception lies upon pernicious tombs!?
I ask thee!
And yet the guileless fall at your waning alter of time
As I once did
As I am condemned to do again
As epoch’s and Era’s bleed from the open mouths of infants
Where do you lie?
Within my open wounds of Discord

Author notes


Written January 19th, 2004

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  • Ryan A Hicks
    May 13, 2004
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    cool. its ok.

  • PoisonedHeart
    January 22, 2004
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    You should consider publishing some of your stuff Bev, I haven't read one that sucked...yet... hehe

  • SternBlinkin
    January 21, 2004
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    *taken aback* whoa...sounds like someone hit some bitter times.
    This is a good poem though. quiet i few words i didn't know. *mumbles* i hate having such a small vocabulary..grrrr..
    There is a lot in this one. Like it is over flowing with information. More then one would think when reading it. Wonder what inspired you to write this one.
    *Stern~Blinkin*