That September was bringing relief
from the scorching wake of summers
and was teaching the augmenting weeks
to create a pastel mishmash
of crunchy flora.
Whilst the summer flowers
prepared to sleep through the winter,
a September-soul emerged from God's rays
to hold the summer-bud of my soul
firmly against his chest
and made me blossom
for all the months till eternity,
embracing me in the aura
of his dedicated love.
Author notes
This poem is dedicated to my love.
His birthday is on 21st September.
September-soul : he was born in September.
Summer-soul : I was born during the summers.
A contest entry
- Anything Goes by Flowergirl.
750 points, ended September 28, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - rawr I want good love poetry!!!! by Live with a passion.
600 points, ended November 15, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - birth of love by rosepoet.
400 points, ended November 19, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This poem is really good.
Good luck in my contest!
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such a sweet poem ... thanks so much for entering... i really enjoyed reading it
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beautifull i loved it thought it was awsome good luck...
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fabulous!
This poem is ABSOLUTELY beautiful. I love how you unconventionally express your love. It was amazing, you're extremely talented. Keep up with the great penning! xox -C-
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Thank you so much for your beautiful words.
I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem.
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Whilst the summer flowers
prepared to sleep through the winter,
a September-soul emerged from God's rays
to hold the summer-bud of my soul
firmly against his chest
and made me blossom
for all the months till eternity,
embracing me in the aura
of his dedicated love.
thts pretty
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Thank you.
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Very nice! I like the references to seasons changing, and then the "blossom" you became. Excellent work poet, very soothing to read and enjoy.
Renee
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem.
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What a lovely dedication to your love--I also loved how you described summer flowers preparing to sleep through winter.
Thank you for entering this lovely piece into the contest.
Saffron
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Thank you so much.
I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.
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nice dedication, well wriiten
my birthdays on the 21st too -
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Thanks a lot.
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this is a beautiful dedication to your love
"to create a pastel mishmash
of crunchy flora."
Interesting word choice in this poem - I love the words you've chosen..best of luck in the contest....
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Thank you so much Tara, for your lovely comments.
I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.
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What a compelling read. It was very lovely and had its own creative style, which flowed from the pen. The last stanza was simply beautiful! Well done! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.
I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.
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Beautiful
I like this piece because it's unique.
Your style of writing is captivating
and curious. Drawing the reader in with
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.
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Very lyrical and lovely, lots of heat and romance. Best of luck.
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Thank you so much.
I am glad that you enjoyed my poem.
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