Fuck all the life
Out of me,
Making me squirt
All my pride and ambitions.
Give me a drink
Which is flavored with lies,
Turning my weakness
To your ammunition.
Then shove your dick
Into my throat -
My being helpless
Will bring you orgasms.
Tasting your juice
Will just hurt me much more
If someone else tastes your lips,
Once so pleasant.
So go on, kill the one you saved,
Reveal the other me to try her.
To me you'll always be the same -
You're both my king and prey.
My prey!
Bury this love,
Living in me,
Bury my freedom
And bury my power.
Rape me and simply
Forget about me,
Use like a whore
And fade in an hour.
Don't satisfy
My thirst for love,
As LOve and luST
Mean just LOST.
Well, you know.
Take me right now,
It will be quite enough.
Then fade away.
It's the end of the show.
So go on, kill the one you saved,
Reveal the other me to try her.
To me you'll always be the same -
You're both my king and prey.
My prey!
Follow your instincts
And bury my feelings.
This has been been meaningless
From the beginning!
So go on, kill the one you saved,
Reveal the other me to try her.
To me you'll always be the same -
You're both my king and prey.
My prey!
A contest entry
- Open up and give me emotion by Velvet Rose Petals.
1150 points, ended September 21, 2008, 53 entries
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Comments
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wow, your words have really hit me hard. This is so full of emotion, pain, anger. THis poem has really touched me. I can relate to a lot of this too...i am so sorry you have had to endure such pain.
Thank you for enterin my contest -
this is a great example of subtle abuse and acceptance because of a low self esteem you really made me feeel that sense of if its not him who else would have me thing WTG Good luck in the contest
[[Baby]] Life May Be A Show, But You're Sure As Hell Not Prince Charming 9.0
why are the bad boys so hot?
well 
this one is NOT age appropriate but its definitely deep and interesting i love the dichotomy between king and prey as if its a two way street in a relationship, brillient!
As LOve and luST
Mean just LOST.
i love that word play too
WTG Good luck in the contest
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interesting.. im sorry it took me so long to comment on it, i started reading it, but then it was a little different for the mood i was i. but good write. interesting how you react to rape in this poem..
Rose
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