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My Rainbow

      Lovely rainbow in the sky
      such wondrous beauty to my eye
      with your playful colors of red and blue
      the world just falls in love with you
      After the rain washes away my sorrows
      The rainbow is there for better tommorows
      A candy coated love of mine
      You tell me life will be just fine
      The rainbow is a birthmark in the sky
      God's little lullabye.

Author notes

"Love makes the world go round."

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  • Autumn Ginger
    May 2

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    rainbows... a good subject and a great description! you kept me interested and reading the whole time. great poem!

  • piccola silver member
    November 24, 2008

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    yes, rainbows are a beautiful mark of nature. I've seed double and even triple rainbows. They're so beautiful. Thank you for entering

  • raymondsgirl8708
    October 5, 2008
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    very nice write. short but sweet. thank you for entering


  • swim.x
    October 1, 2008

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    Short and sweet with so much meaning and beauty! I was amazed with your vivid imagery portrayed here.
    Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
    Chin up,
    Swim.x
    'After the rain washes away my sorrows
    The rainbow is there for better tommorows'


    • DogsLookUp
      October 1, 2008
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      Aww thanks so much for reading I appreciate your opinion.


  • Mrs. Serial Killa
    September 12, 2008
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    Its a great poem! dont get me wrong, but i dont exactly think it fits into my contest i was intending. But good luck on all your other contests you entered..i hope you win gold! cause this poem is definitly deserving of a gold! thanks for entering and good luck!


  • misshugglebugglez
    September 7, 2008
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    Wow! i thought this was great! i love your descriptions and imagery. let's see... i especially enjoyed, "the rainbow is a birthmark in the sky, god's little lullaby." i think you use lovely metaphors. =) nice work, and good luck! thanks for entering! =D very, very well done! =)

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