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September Rain

Silvery splashes -
Howling winds swirling
Tree-tops dancing

Author notes

In Malaysia, September is the rainy season

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    very true Well done !!!!!!


  • poetryality silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    I think it's the "rainy season" here today. It's been raining hard here all day. I feel the change of season in your words. Great work! I wish you well in this contest.


    Renee

    • Lee Tai Wah
      September 13, 2008
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      Hi Renee

      I think it's the rainy season the world over. Thank you for your comment. As this is only my third haiku, it means a lot that it can be "felt".