I'm sending you this something note
It has something small to say
That sometimes when there's something wrong
Something feels that you should pray
And pray you do, for something good
For something that gives hope
Then something special happens
Sends something to help you cope
That something comes from up above
With something we all need
It's something good, insightful
And it's something lacking greed
It's something quite unique and clear
It's something clean and pure
That something is a guiding force
Something makes us secure
A contest entry
- What's Your Word? by Poetess12.
2400 points, ended September 8, 2008, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I like how you used the word "Something" in your poem.
I like the flow of the rhyme.
My favorite part is where it says,
"And pray you do, for something good
for something that gives hope
then something special happens
sends something to help you cope."
This is an overall good poem.
Thank you for your entry.
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