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September Song

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September breeze echoes,
In Pennsylvanian hills,
Ganders begin gathering,
in sunrise crisp and still.

Hues of autumn's bouquet,
spread nature's canopy.
Reds, golds and crimson,
splendor bursts on tree.

Shadows cast, end of day,
downhill mountain stream.
Trickling through seasons,
reflecting sunlight's beam.

Nestled in valley below,
hustle and bustle unfound.
Layed back way of living,
nature's colors surround..

Over hill and over dale,
green of summer gone.
September breeze blow,
past autumn and beyond.

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My Home, The Hills Of Pennsylvania. USA

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 19, 2008
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    I'd like to thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, 'Images From Around the World' with your thought-provoking poetry. Judging will be done soon, and I wish the best of luck to you!!! Thanks again, and have a great day!!! Take care, Cyn xXx


  • Beret55 silver member
    September 9, 2008
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    One of your best Sandy. One of your best.

  • June-bug
    September 7, 2008

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    Well now Sandy you words do paint a beautiful picture of our home state. It is still green here and the days are still hot. But I am starting to see signs of fall. A very peaceful write. As the days of summer are coming to a close and the beauty of Autumn comes in..makes you want to sit back and take deep breaths just to relax and the visions of you words form in the mind. Enjoyed.

  • Ir.muse
    September 7, 2008

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    helloooooo my lovely auntie

    I'm here again to read another beautiful poem of yours.
    It has a wonderful imagery. Wish you luck in the contest.
    Love you

    Shahrzad


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very nice write, indeed. Reminds me of the canyons around the Seattle area. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine.

  • mcheadle
    September 7, 2008

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    Yea you have so much color. We still

    We have so much green yet. Only a tinge and ever so slow. The poem is a beauty, because it is from you and your heart ...old mac


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 7, 2008

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    ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS!!!!!

    Over on the other side of the state it has not begun yet to change but back up north where I am orginally from it changes by now and the peak is about three weeks away. The beautiful picture reminds me of many little quiet streams back home with the vivid colors and shallow, narrow streams. 's

  • chiefmac
    September 7, 2008

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    Lovely look at the end of summer as fall bring new colors to engulf the landscape and forest as leaf change color to fall for winter. Reader are drawn into the read with vivid description and sense of standing in the wood to watch wind strip tree of leaf.


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 7, 2008
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      Wonderful Comment!!!!!!!

      Hello Dan, Thank you for your nice comment. I love this time of the year. Hope this September day is going well and full of smiles for you. Bless you. Sandy


  • Frozentearz
    September 7, 2008

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    I love September. so I am adoring this write.
    wonderful visual play with words. Best of luck to you in the contest.
    Blessings.
    Frozentearz

    • Sandygram silver member
      September 7, 2008
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      Lovely Comment

      Hello Tearz, So nice to hear from you. I hope all is well with you and yours. Hugs and smiles.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

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