The lock over my lips
won't let me tell you
the secret that drips
through those big pools of blue.
Maybe you won't tell
you grin so eagerly
I'm trying to trust
since I must
so I'll say it lovingly:
I
Hate
You.
Kisses.
Author notes
Hmm...I don't know really...why can't I write a happy poem? This doesn't reflect my mood at all...but it's all good ^_^
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as long as it speaks the volume of your desire for the times you write, that should be good enough...it works for me and i'm sure many others would say the same. loved it and miss your penning skills lady.
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ooer! one of those moments....
hope all is well with you.
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Telling some one lovingly that you hate them. I could use a lesson in that. Very original dialectic.
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Ouch. Remind me not to get on your bad side!
Smokin!
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I feel like this often. I only share when I feel like it. I don't even care sometimes. LOL But I always say; "Much Love".
Much Love ♥
Renee
8hug*
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Moods Are A Funny Thing
as lovingly as i write about love | it does not reflect my mood either | nor my ability to be successful at it | this is wonderfully put together | as i uttered the words aloud | the structure and opening tension | called upon me to lower my voice | i don't imagine this to be a shout | it is a voice of restraint | in fact | the irony of it is | that the language | and sentiment behind that language | does not reflect the mood of the subject of this piece either | with all of her vocal restraint | and feigned calm | is she really feeling either | the duty of the writer | say what is not being said | in the space of language | things that often go silently into the night | when we lay down to bed in anger | back to back | this excites me today!?!
cancersaremoody!
the aocrabapple
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Damn!
Sign, you need to stop frontin'! Your skill is sick! I mean really you know you can write, if you penned something about poo poo it would be hot! l.o.l. this is no exception. A very solid piece, honestly.
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I like this! Very interesting complex emotions.
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To say you hate someone lovingly... And then blow kisses. Jeez... Glad to see you post, my turkey bird. Write on. One.
Dez
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