Hole in my heart
I am as lonely as can be
Hole in my heart
Breaking our ties was far from smart
Gone is life's glee, gone ecstasy
All that remains is misery
Hole in my heart.
In a list
A contest entry
- Music Video by Riftkin.
700 points, ended September 15, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into gold (or silver or bronze) #6 by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended September 27, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice write. Thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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whisper
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Sad but more truth, short yet to the point.
Thank you for entering this in my contest.
Riftkin
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Great write i really liked this! Sad but sometimes true! I feel this even when i'm not lonely when i just feel that way. Very well written. Keep on writing!
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