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Wedding Day (option 2)

Just you and I standing there
I can feel you grasping my hands together in yours
The way your eyes search my face
as we stand together in this beautiful place

Your warm smile
and your slightly pink cheeks
You don't even need to speak
I can see it all over you
in you eyes
I can feel it
in the way you caress my hands

You love me
and you want this as much as I do

and you know I want you
eager to step into the world and start over
but not alone this time
we'll be together
it'll be just us
in a dream of forever

no one else exists today
but I hear the final line the priest speaks

 

"you may kiss the bride"

Your kiss
so intense
arms around me
holding me close

I close my eyes
feeling my heart beat
hearing yours

 

our families cheer

but your word are all I hear

 

" I love you "

 

 




 

Author notes

This is how I see my wedding day....though I prolly won't be gitting married

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  • angeleyes73
    March 5

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    Very Beautiful!! I can relate to this poem for I got married yesterday and this is what we were both feeling.


  • Samantha Marie
    September 16, 2008

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    awh this makes me wish i was getting married tomorrow
    so touching
    so emotional
    ah i promised myself i wouldn't cry at weddings anymore *bawls*


  • ProudMomma
    September 7, 2008

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    This was very beautiful!!! I cant wait until my wedding day! this made me wish it was tomorrow and hopefully my husband will feel the same as this person in this poem! I really enjoyed reading this.