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Pom Bomb

gaze glazed
stirring sadly
frozen toxins
staring sultry
vixen slowly sucking
the covers off of
awaiting up turned eyes
the awakening of sinking heads
abruptly attending the assault
of lavishly wanton attention

drunk on knife edge amphetamines
slowly slicing through the core
deep into the silent abyss
which waits for all and
cries out for none

ripe kumquat parodies
scream technicolor fantasies
which rage onward towards their
awaiting milling public of silent
gray anatomists who only dissect
one another and not themselves

spilling tight flow from the seams
as picket fence posts take off in flight
onward to the hastening nowhere
which pulls at
them
the
restless few who
no one ever seems to know
until they glide forth from it all
departing from the scenery
and declaring to the world
here am i, now take me

drawn out and quartered up into
sections partitioned through
bureaucratic tendencies
policies idiosyncratic
erratic frantic
blasé bland
nothing
culminating
finally into
the peace of a
uprooted tree stump

Author notes

tell me what you feel, but also what you think....
as both tend to be fairly valid feedback....

you can call me crazy but tell me why you think so.....

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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