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psuedo dripping unconscious

Carnitine dripping follicles
Parables of ice cream disasters
Surfacing slowly breathing heavy
Tossing twisted landfill fabric into
An ever consuming hole of smashed congress

Effervescent stalagmites rising softly
Each penetrating the negative space
An alternating rhythm of form/ground
Tearing at the lines which blur at twilight
Turning tail from the stalking rising dawn
Bringing with it a screaming reason
Which dully destroys whats left
Of this chaotically beautiful
Maelstrom of seeded hope

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fun, new, different.....
any good?

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  • this was a beautiful poem.... idk what else to say about it.