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Fated Destinys

Busting up these terminals,
We're all swept up in the dizzy dance of fate
Laughing and crying and holding and kissing
We act so naive,
We're all in love and we've all gotten hurt.

All so fucked up
We love these broken lives we lead
As siblings, lovers, friends and strangers
We're all so bound to each other.

A smile to my lips
The sound of your voices brings
I'm so captivated by the angel wings on each of your backs
Moved to tears by the blood between the feathers.

We're all so beautiful
So flawed, to the point of perfection
We're all so afraid
That we can't help but be true.

In life, and in death
In love, and in pain
I'll stand beside all of you
I'll smile for you the same way I always do.

[We can't fall apart because we're already in pieces]

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  • YourAddictedLover
    September 10, 2008

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    awwww!!!!

    Awww!! Jenna your just to sweet!!! T^T Gods I love you to death. *hugs you* I love this poem. It's very true. I'm getting my haircut today. Whenever my mom gets home..lol. I need to trim it a bit.


  • WanderingLover
    September 7, 2008

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    Wow..

    Wow, Jenna. I really enjoyed this poem. *smiles* You made this poem for me, Peace, Salem, and Sky....your so sweet I swear..lol. *hugs you.* Thank you


  • Sir Squigglim
    September 7, 2008

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    Oh. My. God.

    This is officially my favorite! This is simply beautiful, I don't know what can beat it!

    [We can't fall apart because we're already in pieces]
    That... So true it's scary. I love it... alot.


  • xxxSalemxxx
    September 7, 2008
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    :D

    that was good i love it!


  • Beautiful Storm
    September 7, 2008
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    beautiful!

    b'awwwww! this was so good! it was very well-written, flowed nicely, and told a story worth telling. i loved the emotion in this, and the last line "[We can't fall apart because we're already in pieces]" was just SUPERB. it was the best line EVER and i just loved it. it definitely finished your poem nicely, and it had a great start too! fantastical write! well done! keep up the good work!

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