Eyes focus on the trouble at hand,
Shaking as they begin to read,
Screaming inside as the brain begin to realize,
Mind scrambles to the thoughts,
Heart burns as it feels the thoughts hit home,
Thoughts blur as the truth comes clear,
No warnings could prepare you,
No preperations make it easier,
But never before has it been allowed to show,
The hurt will mend,
The mind will heal,
The friendships cannot fail,
Though the mind will always wander,
"What would it have been like if......."
Opinions? Ideas for a title?
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welcome to allpoetry
What if's... the little things that kill and/or torture. First thing that came to mind as I was reading... oh how many times have I felt this one. You chose a creative way to express it. I did trip up on the second line a bit. As far as a title, I usually have issues with titles myself but a friend suggested looking in the beginning or ending lines (I believe that was inspired by e.e. cummings). Persoanlly I would think just "If" would work, but again, I am continually bad with titles.
I enjoyed reading your thoughts here. Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing on... let the words flow from the heart.
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