We didn't meet romantically
The heavens didn't open
The stars weren't dancing in the moonlight
And yet there's something
about the way you sigh
when I talk too fast,
the way your hand slides in mine
with such careless ease,
the way you know what I mean
even when I don't,
the way you get this tiny grin
when you see me coming,
the way your hair falls just right
your eyes twinkle and shine,
the way you know just what to say
that makes everything ok,
and how you see through all my faults
and love me anyway.
I've never felt so complete before
If this is love, please don't stop.
Author notes
I dont really have any notes to add.. but i love a boy, and this is my honesty to him
A contest entry
- ~ You Complete Me... by Nature Song.
515 points, ended September 22, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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Honesty in any relationship is always best. The way that one's makes us feel inside. A leap in our step, the grin in our smile. Just to hear their voice! Very nice poem indeed. Good luck in our contest ~Sie
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Aww...this was so adorable. You definitely showed what it feels like when a person is in love. Good luck in the contest.
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This is so real. I like the part about his sigh when you talk too fast and the way he knows what you mean even when you don't. Sounds like a great relationship and I think you have implied it's not perfect. I like that.
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