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Aspirations

His eyes followed her curves
as they swayed to the music,
his pulse beating
as the music crescendoed.
His mind and body
were ravenous
for the heat she aroused in him
and he knew he'd been empty,
awaiting her arrival.

And silently he begged
for this thirst to be quenched,
as the music became
part of this ritualistic,
primal urge.

Within a whirling kaleidescope
he could see them joining,
through the smoke filled hunger
and the thrumming beat.

With every beat a thrust
like a knife in his loins,
for as the music silenced
her knowing smile
found his hopes.



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Prompt - Insatiable (100 words)

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  • Cannonsfire
    September 7, 2008
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    Very sensually written,and enjoyed by this reader. Thank you for the entry.