The written verses in my heart
that made it beat
suddenly
disappeared;
erased and faded into
nonexistence
vanishing through life's
tears and woes
and the dreams
within those verses
that trickling stream of life
drifted away as
time took away the
youth in my soul
and left but
a mark
of emptiness.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration XI by Samplette.
2100 points, ended September 20, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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that trickling stream of life
love this line...there are so many thoughts to come up to
it gives a flow of thoughts
and Congrats with your HM
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A beautiful write. There is an undertone of loneliness here. Sad, but lovely. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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