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Refract Upon Me

Of all the times
I never thought such bright lights could hide behind such decadent lines
sinking deeper, refracting sooner
a complexity unfolding between these doors
but magic only creates a skyline for others to enjoy
as our minds drift slowly past in our attempt to find more noise

Letting opportunity pass us by once more
the light within seeks more than simple guidelines
refracting through prisms, splitting into colours
none of which make a whole
none of which find route to rise
settle here with me babe
we can watch the stars through glowing city streetlights together

Made and conquered
taking control and mastering all you have seen
become our land, show us all you have learnt
you can be the spectacle I've searched for
since birth and the opening of this letter

Please tell me what you think

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  • magneticblue
    September 13, 2008

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    I liked your rhythm and the way you blended the words. Sounds different than what I'm used to reading from you, more structured and focused. Good job, and keep it up.


    • underdose
      September 15, 2008
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      Thank you very much, it definitely does feel very different, you're right =P
      Thanks again
      x-Underdose-x