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When I'm In Your Eyes

Pardon me for being cheesy,
Pardon this for sounding clingy,
Pardon that this is kind of mushy,
Because you know it normally isn't me.

But I feel like so much time has passed,
When time isn't moving all that fast.
I need to find a way to make this last,
Before you go and put me in the past.

Because with you, I feel so safe.
With you, I feel like everything's ok.
You give me a reason to live another day,
And you're always destroying obstacles in my way.

And if I could, I'd give the sea to you.
I'd give the sky, the stars and the moon.
I'd hand you a mountain if I could too.
If only they were things that I could do.

It's hard now to sit around and lie,
It's hard to find a reason to cry.
Those are good things, and get better as time passes by.
Because I know I'm home, when I'm looking in your eyes.

Author notes

Not sure where I got the inspiration. I just made it up as I went along. I dedicate this to my darling Abby~

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  • Sir Squigglim
    September 7, 2008
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    ohhh the flow is amazing. It's awesome!


  • Sweetangelgrace
    September 7, 2008

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    Your willingness at attempting to put your heart-felt thoughts down on paper is sweet...BECAUSE falling in love is the greatest experience that man can ever had.

    Thanks for sharing!

    ~~GRACY~~


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    Humm..this is really a heartfelt journey of the life you brought here my friend......I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing it..