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Complete

No longer do I walk around
not knowing where to go,
Because now,
I go straight into your arms.

My mind and thoughts,
never to be blank again,
Because now,
They are filled with you.

My heart and soul,
can be stitched back together,
Because now,
They need to be given to you.

My dreams
can disappear,
Because now,
I no longer need them.

My life
is complete,
Because now,
I have you.

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You know I love you, I always have. x

For someone special =)

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  • FaithNoMore
    October 10, 2008
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    awesome write


  • Lae Fyrestorme
    September 8, 2008
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    This is beautiful. So sweet and full of feeling. Great write hun

    ~love lae xo


  • first forgotten
    September 7, 2008

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    this is such a beautiful write, my dear. its so powerfull and you express your love so vividly! i love it, and i love you!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    Yes..this is the strength of this life..where love becomes the completeness ...wonderful thought is treated with a feel of the dedication...


  • CharcoalScreams
    September 7, 2008
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    Dario

    I can't believe you said that... it is for you, silly!
    x


  • Hate-And-Pain
    September 7, 2008
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    A very beautiful poem flows perfectly and its very sweet, he's a very lucky guy

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