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Eager Eyes

Eyes watch me,
Like a pulpit lord,
Commanding the verses,
With an onmipotent force.
More sudden and strong than a drill sergeant,
The Lord of Biblical War.
Bombs fly,
And the effegy stands tall,
A reqiuem for the effevescent truth,
Sparkling like carbonated water,
With a congratulational flame,
Eternal.
True.
Eternal.
Free.
The eyes watch me.
The Eager Eyes.

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