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Haiku - September Icing

September marches
towards hoar winter's whiteness
I sing frieze starches

Author notes

I sing frieze starches
or
Icing freezes arches

nb alternate definition of marches
noun: district consisting of the area on either side of a border or boundary of a country or an area Example: "The Welsh marches between England and Wales"

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    that looks a little gold but a nice haiku and pic


  • poetryality silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    This is quite the different haiku. Interesting, to say the least. Makes me shiver a bit. I don't like the extremes of winter but love the variety of Fall. Good work here poet. I wish you well in the contest.


    Renee


  • Lily of the Valley
    September 7, 2008

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    Simply Stunning ...

    I love the winter, especially when there is fresh snow fall or thick frost as it is resheshing, just like this poem. I sing for the icing on the world. The background is beautiful and well matched backdrop for this Haiku