Year's wane as
disregard diminishes
memories causing
them to abate
with shrinking love.
Faint recollection
of your scent comes
as a blank slate
after rain falls away.
A contest entry
- quickie♥ by etoile.
475 points, ended September 19, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this is awesome short but powerful
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I like, the thoughtful ness of this, brief and leaves more between the lines than in them...very nicely done...PK
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year's --> years.
pet peeve. -
i really liked this.
the take on the prompt was amazing
i really liked the alliteration in the second line.
thanks a lot for entering and best of luck
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short an sweet
I'm the type of person who gets ant's in the pants when reading, but because I'm half deaf I have a habit of reading slow. I like short poem's but one's that have meaning. Like your's it seem's to have alot of emotion and feeling in it. Anyways thanks for shareing
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