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graphics derived from "Bohemian Renaissance" by Freed by Mercy http://allpoetry.com/poem/3209122
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A contest entry
- Favorite Poets & People: GreenHrtPaleMoon by Dienush.
500 points, ended September 12, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so odd.........but really good. I am glad that it won you a silver. All the best with it in future contests! Awesome stuff, dude!
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Unlike anything I have ever come across, I cannot, in good conscience dissect this with each individual word and phrase as it seems that they are meant to flow erratically into one another. A skillful use of graphic art and word placement. HIGHLY unusual and all the more interesting for it!
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thanks; to be honest I really just enjoyed the surface of this one, content to merely paint and splash about with words and phrases, like someone too tired to make sense... the knickers section had a bit of a theme, but that's about it. If I did another, I might have a need to take it a step further and add some coherent meaning, but then again...
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a litle hard to follow but what flare and artistry. Like me, think you share a little "Hemmingway's disease??
Joe
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I'll have to google that lol
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG
This is wonderful. Very original and I love how it looks. It looks like you've really put time into this. Thanks for the entry 
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I love it!
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