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Show me that you care!

When you look at me,Are you really looking at me?
Or are you looking through me.
I ask myself the question constantly.
Am i just here so your not alone,or is it the other way around?
I need more from you.
Show me emotion, passion,something to make me believe that your happy.
Because im starting to think your not.
Six months almost,it is but it isnt along time.
I have put more faith and trust into you than anyone before.
And i tried so hard to not let you in,
But some how you did.
Just show me something that says its all worth while!
Show me something even if just a smile...
One day you may read this and think to yourself why didnt you just tell me,
But the truth is i did.
You just didnt see it.
Uncried tears and unshouted words.
I dont want what happend to my parents happen to us.
Love is so much more than waking up and going to work, cooking dinner, watching tv, and sleeping!!!!
I need more!
Show me something look into my eyes and tell me how much i mean to you.
Cry for when i say im leaving when we fight.
Do something!
Show me something!
Im not like your mother im not going to leave you stranded.
I need you, and want you forever in my life.
Just to a chance and show me that you care!

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  • chelsie-333
    February 23
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    i like this :) its intense

    im new and idk how this works, its not letting me aplaud you. so i give you three smiles


  • TacoReBellious
    September 7, 2008
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    i rather enjoyed this poem,,, my AP is on random and it landed on urs,,i liked this poem very much