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The Chosen One...

The God of heaven
Needed a savior for his creatures
He made "me"
Shaped as the Goddess of

Fire...

Wind...

Water...

and Earth...

My magical horse, take me to where should i really be
And I’ll make things in order...

Author notes

the picture was made by Pat Brennan

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Nice title and interpretation of the picture prompt. Nice form. Good flow and tone. Nice depth of feeling. Thank you for your entry.