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spring is coming

the land warms up
like my body to your arms
and the sun comes out
like the smile on your face.
they say that it is spring
and my mood improves,
but it is still cold at times,
outside and in my mind,
when I feel it so acutely
that you are not here.

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The truth is, I miss you.

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