In a grand sculpture carved under mooney twilight,
burning forever in lustrous gazing flames of love,
visions know how to console in lost spirit senses,
deep as two wells loosing in an entrance mysterious.
Enriching time penetrates distress contemplating,
when two hearts tightens in shivering palpitations,
what remains to be engrossed in the solemnizing vows
when longings are nothing to traverse in transcendence.
Ugly isolation hopes seems multitude to flee in vain,
in real mirrors' enlightenment to guide for an eternity,
with echoes of unblinking visions copulating affections;
through shimmering infinite rays in touching adoration.
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Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Picture Prompt
Photo © by Danny
A contest entry
- PIF/Picture Inspired (just because) by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended September 13, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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I have just one question...
How do you do that?! I wish I could write like this; your poetry is one of those kinds that after someone else reads it, you're left thinking, "oh man, i really wish i could write like that"
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Your imagery in this is just wonderful! An excellent entry indeed. Thanks so much.
Gaylene
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