I cut myself to ease the pain,
to ease the pain of all i've been threw.
i hold on tight to my knife,
as i cut threw the skin,
it cuts my soul.
As the blood runs down my arm,
i can see my past bleeding out,
like a river running wild.
i feel my pain drip away,
it feels so good,
yet it is so dangerous.
i cut myself to see the blood,
to see if im really here.
i cut myself to remind me,
that i am still human.
people say i am crazy,
but i say im going to be ok.
they judge me for what i do,
but don't know the pain themselfs.
they go through life pretending their life is perfect,
hidding the truth of whats really going on.
but not me i embrace it,
i take what is givin to me,
i deal with the truth by cutting.
i cut myself so i don't cry,
i cut myself to feel the pain,
i cut myself to getrid of the shame.
A contest entry
- Tears Ran Dry, Echoes Of Sadness (( Give Me Dark, Creepy, Sad, Cutting, Suicide, Ex.)) by HereComesTheSun.
550 points, ended September 14, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - when life hurts too much by Mountainwhispers.
450 points, ended November 1, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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oh my word I dont no what to say this is very descriptive your words speak your true feelings which is very disturbing yet I can feel what your feeling as I read. This was well written. I wish you the best I really hope things would get better there must be another way to ease the pain thanks for your entry Ill be lookin out for u!
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so true and so well written be safe please
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so true.
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